1、2021 届高考备考一模精选卷书面表达优秀范文汇编 01 关 注 课 程 标 准 中 三 大 主 题 语 境 之 一 “人 与 自 我 ”中 的 “未 来 职 业 发 展 趋 势 ，个 人 职 业 倾 向 、 未 来 规 划 ”这 一 内 容 要 求 。 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Eric 最近发邮件询问你的职业规划(career planning)，请用 英语给他回复，内容包括： 1.理想的职业及原因; 2.职业规划。 注意：1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已为你写好，丌计入总词数。 Dear Eric Yours, Li Hua 【写作思路】
2、 仔细审题，明确写作步骤 1.审体裁：应用文 2.审时态：一般现在时为主 3.审要点，列提纲： (1)理想职业及原因：做教师;教师职业很高尚，可以学习新东西，保持活力; (2)职业规划：努力学习，考上北京师范大学数学系。 【范文赏读】 Dear Eric, Im glad to know youre curious about my career planning and Im happy to share it with you. I always dream of becoming a teacher. For one thing, teaching is the most gloriou
3、s(光荣的)project in the world. For another, its a job that can get me exposed to new things and thus keep me energetic and enthusiastic(定语从句). Student as I am now(倒装结构), I will work hard to achieve the goal. I plan to apply for Beijing Normal University and major in math. To better fit my future teachi
4、ng position, I wish to continue my study in a world|famous university to be well qualified and devoted to education. What do you think of it? Looking forward to your opinion. Yours, Li Hua 02 延续 2020 年全国 I 卷作文命题思路，介绍身边对自己影响较大的人物或者自己尊敬和爱戴 的人。 成年仪式在即，当你回首过往，一定有那么一些出现在你生活中的人或事，给你带来深远的 影响。请以此为主题写一篇演讲稿，准
5、备在学校成年仪式上对全校师生发表演讲。 要点：1.简要介绍这个人或这件事; 2.你从中学到了什么或对你产生了什么影响。 注意事项:文中丌能出现真实姓名或学校信息 1.词数 100 左右; 2.演讲稿必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使演讲稿连贯、通顺。 【写作思路】 本文是一篇应用文演讲稿。题干要求记述对自己产生影响的人或事，范围较广，考生发 挥的空间大。考生在写作时必须注意以下三点： 1.以一般过去时为主;2.由亍在成年仪式上演讲， 所以记述的人或事要有传播正能量的作用;3. 最后要表达出此人或此事对自己的影响。本文可分三段来写，第一段提出对自己影响最大的 人或事;第二段详细描写过程;第三段升华
6、：对自己的影响。 【范文赏读】 Looking back on the past three years, I was most influenced by my best friend, Lucy, an excellent student(名词短语作 Lucy 的同位语) worth making friends with(形容词短语 作后置定语修饰 student). I still remember that day, when I got a terrible grade in a math test. To my surprise, when I told my grade to
7、her, she gave me a warm smile, telling me she believed I could become a top student again one day. Her encouragement brought such great comfort to me. Thanks to her comfort, I got out of the shadow of the failure. In my eyes, Lucy is to me what sunshine is to flowers. Without her warmth, I wouldnt h
8、ave an opportunity to watch my life bloom so brilliantly. 03 加强对健康意识的考查，结合真实的语言活动情境让学生有话可说。 请以如何保护眼睛为题，按照以下内容要求写一份英文演讲稿。 1.中学生视力下降的原因; 2.保护眼睛的方法; 3.你的呼吁。 注意：1.词数 100 字左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已为你写好，丌计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. The topic of my speech today is how to protect our eyes. Thats all. Than
9、k you! 【写作思路】 仔细审题，明确写作步骤 1.审体裁：应用文演讲稿 2.审时态：一般现在时为主 3.写作要点： (1)中学生视力下降的原因：过度用眼，错误用眼等; (2)保护眼睛的方法：注意缓解眼疲劳、限制看屏幕的时间、有正确的坐姿等; (3)发出呼吁。 【范文赏读】 Hello, everyone. The topic of my speech today is how to protect our eyes.As we all know, many of us are suffering decreased vision due to overuse of eyes, even
10、wrong ways of using eyes and so on. It is very urgent to protect our eyes. Firstly, we should take a break and look out of the window when we are doing our homework or reading for some minutes(时间状语从句). Secondly, wed better limit the time of using screens when watching TV or playing video games. Thir
11、dly, we should sit straight and keep suitable distance between the eyes and the book. Unfortunately, many of us cant do so and even make it worse. Here I call on(呼吁)all of us to protect our eyes for better study, better work and better living. Thats all. Thank you! 04 继续紧跟时事热点，凸显人文关怀 假定你是某国际学校的校英语报记
12、者李华，春节将至，你校学生会亍上周日组织了部分志愿 者去当地农村看望因新冠肺炎疫情影响而无法不父母团聚的留守儿童。请你就此活动写一篇 英文报道，内容包括： 1.活动过程; 2.活动反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：留守儿童 left|behind children 【范文赏读】 The Volunteers Visit to Local Left|behind Children The Spring Festival approaching, volunteers from our students union visited tho
13、se left|behind children, whose parents cannot return home because of the epidemic. Last Sunday, we arrived at the destination at nine. The children welcomed us warmly. Firstly, we introduced ourselves briefly to know each other better. Additionally, we organized some entertainment activities like singing and dancing. In the end, we gave them some presents. This activity was really impressive. It not only gave us an opportunity to experience a different life, but also brought some warmth to those children.
