1、1/3 本单元的写作任务是写建议信。建议信是常用的书信形式之一,主要用来针 对收信的一方存在的某一问题提出自己的合理化建议, 从而达到帮助对方解决问 题的目的。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 基本框架 1开头(beginning)开门见山,向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。 2主体(body)对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由,接着提出自己的 建议(reasons and evidence)。 3结尾(ending)呼应开头,重申观点(restate your opinion)。 注意事项: 1开门见山,直入主题。在书信正文的开头找准话题的切入点,自然
2、而然 地引出自己想要谈的主题。写信时要充分了解情况,有的放矢,以提高书信的针 对性。 2给出希望对方采取你所提出的建议的理由。在陈述理由的过程中要换位 思考,尽量为对方考虑。要用事实说话,以增强说服力。 3语气要和缓,让对方考虑你的想法或者建议,以理服人是关键,不能把 自己的想法强加于人。 4给出合理建议,通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向,从而达到写信的最 终目的。 常用词块 1I think it would be a good idea if.如果我认为是个好主意。 2In my opinion it would be wise to.依我看做是明智的。 3I suggest that yo
3、u should.我建议你应该 4In my opinion,youd better.我认为你最好 5I advise you to.我建议你 6If I were you,I would.换作我,我会 7Why not.?/Why dont you.?为什么不 8How about.?/What about.?怎么样? 2/3 常用语句 精彩开头 1I know you are now having trouble communicating with others,and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦,你也可能经常感到孤独。 2I
4、m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on. 很高兴收到你征求建议的来信。 3Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you. 这里有一些帮助你的建议。 丰满主体 1First(ly),why not join a club?If you do this,you can make friends. 首先,为什么不参加一个俱乐部?如果你参加俱乐部,就会交到朋友。 2Second(ly),you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That
5、way,you will feel better. 其次,你应该尽力与人交谈。这样,你会感觉好点。 3Third(ly),it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this,you will calm yourself down. 第三,如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做,你会使自己 平静下来。 4Last but not least,you should talk with her first. 最后但同等重要的是,你应该先和她谈一谈。 5As far as I am conce
6、rned/In my opinion,you should help each other. 就我而言/在我看来,你们应该互相帮助。 余味结尾 1I hope you will find these ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。 2As time goes on,people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice. 如果你采用以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解你,会愿意和你交 朋友的。 3/3 3I belie
7、ve that if you follow my advice,youll get along well with your classmates. 我相信,如果你采用我的建议,你会和同学们相处好的。 假设你是李华,你的美国朋友 Mike 想参加 CCTV 的越战越勇节目,由 于不知道选哪首歌参赛,故写邮件征求你的建议。现请你回一封邮件,推荐张艺 兴(Lay Zhang)的单曲蹦(Boom),并说明如下理由: 1该歌曲在中国流行程度高; 2符合 Mike 的演唱风格; 3歌词易记,歌曲欢快,令人愉悦。 注意: 1词数 80 左右; 2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ 参考范文 De
8、ar Mike, Im really glad to hear that youll show us your talent in the contest. I think it makes good sense to sing a song which is popular in China and suitable for your singing style as well.Thus I believe Lay Zhangs new single Boom would be the best choice. The reasons are as follows. First, the lyrics are easy to recite. Second, its a happy song with pleasant contents. Last but not least, the song is a hit right now, which will help you win over more support. Good luck! Yours sincerely, Li Hua