1、Period 6 Writing 写作实践Unit 1Life Choices1.Learn Reading for Writing to master the structure and the languages to write an e-mail.2.Master the method of writing an e-mail.3.Practise writing an e-mail.Activity 1细节把握Read the email on P18 and answer the questions.1.Where is Fang Lan living now?_2.Who is
2、referred to as a friend of both Fang Lan and Wang Ying?_She is living in Canada now.Xie Zijun.3.Which classes do Wang Ying and Xie Zijun attend in the same classroom?_4.What are the differences between their senior secondary school and junior secondary school?_English and physics.They dont have a fi
3、xed classroom.Besides，they go to different classes for different subjects and also for different levels.5.What do Wang Ying and Xie Zijun intend to do?_6.What will Wang Ying do after writing the email?_They intend to attend a competition.She will finish her slides because she will make a presentatio
4、n tomorrow.Activity 2文章架构1.An email includes the following parts.Read the email on P18 and put them in the right order.a.ending and wishesb.greetingc.subject lined.reasons to finish writinge.questions about the other personf.information about ones own lifeg.signature答案cbefdag2.Fill in the blanks to
5、complete the structure according to the email you read on P18.greetingsquestionsinformationreasonsendingsignatureActivity 3增分靓句1.书信体通用佳句。请在P18的文本中找出这样的句子。答案:_ Hows your life in Canada?I hope you have adapted well tothe new situation and are enjoying your new school.I look forward to hearing all abou
6、t whats happening to you soon.2.高级句式表达形容词比较级和不定式作定语。请在P18的文本中找出这样的句子。答案:_ Its much bigger than my junior secondary school and theres a huge gym!I think my new school gives me a chance to become a different person and I like the“new me”.本单元的写作任务是写一封私人电子邮件。英文电子邮件与英文书信格式基本一样，其基本要素是主题、称谓、正文、结尾及署名。1.电子邮件
7、主题应当做到言简意赅，并突出邮件的重要性。2.私人电子邮件不用那么正式，可以用“Hello/Hi”问候对方。3.邮件段落最好控制在两三段之内，最重要的事情写在正文最前面。如果电子邮件涉及多个信息点，可以采用分条目的方法，如小标题、编号来使得邮件想要表达的内容层次清晰。4.一般结尾语中只有第一个单词首字母大写而剩余单词都小写，此处与称呼不同，通常用“Best regards！”，“Best wishes！”等表示美好祝愿的语句结尾。5.最后需要署名。常用表达1.How have you been recently?2.How is everything going?3.How is your l
8、ife in China?4.I hope that you can.5.It is so good to have a friend like you.6.Please let me know your decision as soon as possible.7.Thank you very much for your time and consideration.8.Thanks so much for the lovely dinner last night.9.I would like to invite both of you to my house when you are av
9、ailable.10.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.典例展示假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Henry十分关心你，写信询问你是否适应了高中生活。请你根据以下提示，用英语回一封电子邮件，内容如下：1.简述高中校园生活；2.同学相处情况；3.英语学习情况。注意：1.词数应为80左右；2.开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。范文赏读Dear Henry，How is everything going?Delighted to hear from you and Im writing to tell you som
10、ething about my school life in senior high school.I am quite used to the life here，for it is so colourful.There are various afterclass activities and clubs，which can help me learn and relax.Besides，my classmates are so friendly that I can get along well with them.Personally，English in senior high sc
11、hool is more challenging，but Ive been making progress with my English teachers help.I believe I can learn it well if I keep working hard.In brief，I enjoy my life in my new school.How about you?I am looking forward to your early reply.With best wishes!Yours，Li Hua第一步审题谋篇审题写作要求是写一封私人电子邮件。写作时应注意下面几点：1.
12、确定文体：这是一篇应用文，写作中应注意应用文的常规格式；2.主体时态：应以_为主；3.主体人称：由于是写关于自己的学校生活情况，所以应该以_为主。一般现在时第一人称谋篇第一段：问候并说明写邮件的目的；第二段：介绍自己的学校生活情况；第三段：表达祝愿。第二步遣词造句核心词汇1.校园_2.精力充沛的_3.教学方法_4.和不同_5.以前的_6.挑战性的_campusdynamicteaching methodsbe different frompreviouschallenging7.相处融洽_8.积极参加_9.各种课外活动_get along/on well withtake an active
13、part invarious afterschool activities连词成句1.在新学校我已经学习了一个月了。_ for one month.2.大大的校园和热情的(enthusiastic)老师让我很吃惊。The big campus and _.3.这里的老师们精力充沛，学识渊博(intelligent)。The teachers here _.I have been learning in my new schoolthe enthusiastic teachers amaze me greatlyare dynamic and intelligent4.他们对我们很有耐心。_5.
14、他们的教学方法很有趣，与以前的老师截然不同。_6.我们正在学的课程更有挑战性。The subjects we are learning _.They are very patient with us.Their teaching methods are very interesting and quite different fromare more challengingthe ones of our previous teachers.7.我有信心能学好它们。_8.我与同学们相处融洽，而且积极参加各种课外活动。_Im confident that I can learn them well
15、.Im getting along/on well with my classmates and I take an active part in various afterschool activities.第三步句式升级1.请把句2改写成what引导的主语从句。_2.请把句3和句4用not only.but also.连成一句话。_What amazes me greatly are the big campus and the enthusiasticteachers.The teachers here are not only dynamic and intelligent，but a
16、lsovery patient with us.3.请把句6和句7用although连成一句话。_Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging，Im confident that I can learn them well.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。参考范文Dear Jack，Im writing to tell you something about my new school._I have been learning in my new schoo
17、l for one month.What amazes me greatly are the big campus and the enthusiastic teachers.The teachers here are not only dynamic and intelligent，but also very patient with us.Besides，their teaching methods are very interesting and quite different from the ones of our previous teachers._Best wishes.Yours truly，LiHuaAlthough the subjects we are learning are more challenging，Im confident that I can learn them well.In the meanwhile，Im getting along/on well with my classmates and I take an active part in various afterschool activities.I am looking forward to meeting you in my school.
