1、 Because I speak English well, and I like doing sports very much, I will be a good volunteer for the Games. I often do sports if I have time. I know the local conditions well With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides
2、, I am keen on sports and I exercise a lot in my spare time Because I speak English well and I like doing sports very much, I will be a good volunteer for the Games. I often do sports if I have time. I know the local conditions well. I think I will give the best service to everyone in the Games. Wit
3、h the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I am keen on sports and I exercise a lot in my spare time. Whats more, I am familiar with the local conditions. So I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participat
4、es in the Games. Because I speak English well, and I like doing sports very much, I will be a good volunteer for the Games. I often do sports if I have time. I know the local conditions well With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I am qualified to be a volunteer for th
5、e Games. Besides, I am keen on sports and I exercise a lot in my spare time What makes a good paragraph? Because I speak English well, and I like doing sports very much, With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I will be a good volunteer for the Games. I often do sports
6、if I have time. I know the local conditions well. I think I will give the best service to everyone in the Games. I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I am keen on sports and I exercise a lot in my spare time. Whats more, I am familiar with the local conditions. So I promise I wil
7、l offer the best service to whoever participates in the Games. 时间先后时间先后 first, then, later, in the end, eventually, since then, after a while 转折关系转折关系 but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless, 因果关系因果关系 because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, for the reason that 让步关系让步关系 though, a
8、lthough, even if, even though, in spite of, despite , as , while cause-effect concession transition time 递进关系递进关系 whats more, in addition, furthermore on the one hand on the other hand 条件关系条件关系 if, unless, as long as, on condition that , provided, suppose, in case 表表 列列 举举 for example / instance, ta
9、kefor example, thats to say, in other words 表表 总总 结结 in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated progress conditions particularize conclusion A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns. 丰富的句式：丰富的句式：( (常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。 e.g. Wh
10、at a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was ! 感叹句感叹句 exclamatory sentence 强调句强调句 emphasis e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible. e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when
11、they met the young man. e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary. 倒装句倒装句 inversion 省略句省略句 elliptical e.g. In my opinion, that room should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the sch
12、ool library. 定语定语 从句从句 attributive clause e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. With 复合复合 结构结构 e.g. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. Time passed quickly before we knew it. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up soo
13、ner or later. 状状 语语 从从 句句 名词性名词性 从从 句句 noun clause e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present. 6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. 5. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. 1. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. 2. We all think he is
14、 a great man. 7. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. 3. I wont believe what he says. 4. I like English best at school. summary A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words. A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns. A good paragrap
15、h is one that usually consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences. Do I use any linking words? Are there any mistakes? Is there any advanced vocabulary? Are there any good sentence patterns? Do I avoid using Chinglish? 最近，国家教育部要求中小学最近，国家教育部要求中小学 生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生 每天跑每天跑1000100
16、0米，初中生米，初中生15001500米，高米，高 中生中生20002000米。对此，有些人表示支米。对此，有些人表示支 持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以 下材料，写一篇以“下材料，写一篇以“Should we Should we give more attention to give more attention to students health or grades?”students health or grades?” 为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。 支持方支持方 的理由的理由 反对方反对方 的理由的理由 你的看法你的看法 及理由及理由 1 1可以促进对可以促进对 体育的重视；体育的重视； 2 2可以增强学可以增强学 生的体魄；生的体魄； 3 3更有利于提更有利于提 高学习效率。高学习效率。 1 1学生以学习为学生以学习为 主，考试成绩决主，考试成绩决 定个人前途；定个人前途； 2 2过高的要求学过高的要求学 生难以达到；生难以达到； 3 3长跑可能引起长跑可能引起 感冒或伤害。感冒或伤害。 ( (考生自行考生自行 发挥发挥2 23 3点点) ) 注意：注意：1 1任选内容写成一个段落，或是写整篇文章。任选内容写成一个段落，或是写整篇文章。 2 2对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥。对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥。
