1、第2讲齐头并进,抑扬顿挫并列句在写作中的应用,一、魔法导航并列句是由并列连词连接两个分句而组成的句子,其基本结构是:简单句+并列连词+简单句。并列句中的前后两个分句的逻辑关系可分为以下几种:1.并列或递进:常用连词是and, not only.but also(不仅而且)。典句引领Not only is he the first Chinese to go to space,but also he is one of the greatest astronauts in the world.他不仅是第一个进入太空的中国人,而且是世界上最伟大的宇航员之一。,雕词琢句(1)If you are a
2、ble to come with us,please let us know and we ll wait for you (我们将会等你) at the school gate at 9 in the morning.(2)I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I want you to do me a favor/help me(并且我想让你帮我一个忙).(3)剪纸是中国的传统之一,而且我相信你会喜欢它的。(2017课标全国)Paper-cutting is o
3、ne of the Chinese traditions and I am sure you will like it.,2.转折:常用的连词是but和yet。典句引领Secondly,voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors,but rather on how many social-networking resources they have.第二,这种投票并不取决于竞争者的优势,而是取决于他们掌握了多少社交网络资源。(2016江苏卷)雕词琢句(1)Maybe the traini
4、ng is a bit difficult for you, but you can improve your skills quickly(但是你可以迅速提高你的技能)through it.(2)Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere(但是更重要的是真诚).,(3)我想去博物馆,但是我的同班同学绝大部分人想去野餐。I would love to go to a museum,but most of my classmates wanted to go f
5、or a picnic.3.原因:常用的连词是for。典句引领It must have rained last night,for the ground is wet.昨晚肯定下雨了,因为地面是湿的。雕词琢句他阅读有困难,因为他的视力不好。He has trouble in reading,for his sight is poor.(for连接的并列句),4.对比:常用的连词是while。典句引领At school,some students are active while some are shy.在学校,有些学生积极,而有些学生害羞。雕词琢句(1)Good habits can con
6、tribute to high learning efficiency, while bad ones lead to the opposite(而坏习惯结果却恰恰相反).(2)Some people are fond of enjoying movies at the cinema while some prefer to watch movies on the Internet(而有些人更喜欢在网上看电影).,二、学以致用1.完美文章结合括号中的提示,将并列句补充完整。No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in th
7、e National College Entrance Examination,(1) but what should we do(但是我们应该做什么)in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.First,its very important to have a right attitude,(2) for a normal state of mind and self-confidence can help us to relax(因为一种正常的心态和自信心可以帮助我们放松)and enable us to overcome
8、 difficulties bravely.Meanwhile,we should have a definite goal (3)and we should evaluate ourselves correctly(并且我们应该正确地评价自己).Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done.Besides,wed better talk with our parents,teachers and classmates,(4) and they ma
9、y help us out(他们,可能会帮助我们摆脱困境)when we are in trouble.Finally,keeping a proper balance between study and rest keeps us ener getic (5) and a healthy diet is useful as well(健康的饮食也有用).With these done,I think we can greatly improve our performance.2.话题写作【本期话题】语言学习【写作微练】根据下面的信息提示,就“如何学好英语”写一篇80词左右的英语短文。1.养
10、成听、读英语的习惯;2.经常背诵英语短文以提高英语语感;3.坚持写英语日记,提高写作能力;4.增强自信心,勇于直面困难。注意:至少运用两种并列句。,本文档仅为全套资料之一，欢迎点击下方按钮链接，下载全套资料！,请点此到下载本文全套资料,答案One possible version:In order to have a good command of English, we can do various things. To begin with, we should make it a routine to listen to and read English. In addition, re
11、cite English articles frequently, for it is of benefit to developing our language sense. Moreover, its a good idea to keep English diaries ev-ery day, or we cant improve our writing ability in a short time. Last but not least, not only should we build up our confidence, but also we should meet diffi
12、culty bravely.,三、实战提能假设你是李华,最近你校要举行以“My Favorite Teacher”为主题的英语作文比赛。请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文介绍你的班主任Mr. Li。1.年近50, 多次获奖;2.知识渊博,教学有方,课堂生动有趣;3.对学生要求严格,为实现“中国梦”鼓励学生努力学习;4.在他的指导下,学生进步很快。我会审题,我会联想1.词汇铺路(1)表扬praise(2)鼓励encourage(3)喜爱like/love/be fond of(4)生动有趣interesting and lively(5)对某人要求严格be strict with sb.(6)与关
13、系融洽get along well with/be on good terms with(7)取得进步make progress2.句型搭桥(1)Not only.but also. (2)such/so.that.,我会表达,答案One possible version:My Favorite TeacherOf all my teachers, Mr. Li is the one who impresses me most. Though he is nearly fifty, he looks very young for his age.In recent years, he has
14、been awarded prizes many times because of his ex-cellent work, but he remains modest. Not only is he knowledgeable, but al-so he employs various effective ways to make his class lively and interest-ing. He is strict with us and encourages us to study hard in the hope of achieving the Chinese Dream.
15、With the help of him, all the students have made rapid progress.,All in all, Mr. Li is more than our good teacher. He is also our best friend. He is such a learned person that we admire him very much.美句必背1.Though nearly fifty, he looks very young for his age.2.It is because of his excellent work that he has been praised many times.3.But for his help,we couldnt have made so much progress in our study.,0,
