1、By Maggie如何灵活多样的表达要点Students in writing踩不中点，既怕不完整，又怕太繁琐ContentLanguage Logic找不到替换词和句式段与段关系不明，不会用连接词 3.A healthy diet can equip us with a strong and healthy body A healthy diet makes us strong and healthy.1.同义替换法 There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could promote the sale of a product. I
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4、rnet nowadays.nowadays. 2.Make sure that you have 8 hours sleep. 8 hours sleep must be 3These days, football is one of the most popular sports in the world. Abundant information is available on the internet.guaranteed - enjoys great popularity, is well-received, - global/ globally, worldwide, univer
5、sal/ universallyFootball, enjoys great popularity worldwide If things are not properly If things are not properly dealt withdealt with , our labor will be totally lost. , our labor will be totally lost. 4If things are not 4If things are not properly properly , our labor will be totally lost., our la
6、bor will be totally lost. 5In the United States , everyone can buy guns. .In the United States , guns are to everyone. 6.With a growing number of people sharing information online , its positive side stands out. With an incresing of people sharing information online, some active factors gradually ap
7、pear. sharing online information ,which enjoys growing poopularity ,is beneficial.tendencyavailablehandled 7 I believe televison influences our community7 I believe televison influences our community in a negative way. in a negative way. 8.They start to pick up the habit of characters on the show. 8
8、.They start to the habit of characters on the show.get intoI hold the view that TV is affecting people negatively. I I have a preference for have a preference for a a basicbasic mobile mobile phone though it is not as phone though it is not as advanced as a smartphone.advanced as a smartphone. 2.It
9、is of great importance to keep a balanced diet as well as a healthy eating habit . 3.All members shoud be equally treated . All members should receive . 2.词性转换法I prefer to use an ordinary cell phone compared to a smartphone.A balanced diet and a healthy eating habit are important.equal treatment The
10、 book is a reflection of Chinese society in the 1930s. we found it difficult to solve this complicated problem.what he had said left a deep impression on me .school buses are safe for the environment 2.词性转换法The book reflects Chinse society in the 1930s.we found difficulty in solving this complicated
11、 problem.His words deeply impressed me.environmentally 1.改变语态 Parents should give children more praise. We are goint to discuss this problem in the meeting.3.句式改变法Children should be given more praise .This problem is going to be discussed in the meeting. 2.使用不定式 it is difficult and i cant finish it
12、We are goint to discuss this problem in the meeting.3.句式改变法I find it difficult to finish it .This problem is going to be discussed in the meeting. 3.使用定语从句 Mr smith is our boss. He will leave for Japan next week.Mr.smith , who is our boss ,will leave for Japan next week. 1.I totally agree . 2.Health
13、 is the most valuable thing.I couldnt agree more .4.正话反说Nothing is more valuable than health. 1women dont have equal rights in some ccountries . 2.without advertising ,it will be very difficult for customers to judge the value of a product.Women fail to get equal rights in some countries.5.反话正说with
14、advertising , it will easy for customers to judeg the value of a product.By Maggie“Do you really know me?”The beginning?The beginning?Yes, Copying it is enough?Copy what I think is more important? Or this cant happen? Both male and female are buying into the trend,but women are expected to do more s
15、hopping on the Internet than men. It seems women are now more attracted to the convenience of online shopping than they used to be. 3.Average spending online this Christmas by women will rise to f240(3360 yuan)compared to the slightly lower average of f233 for men.Women do more shopping online than
16、men.句首 1. What appeals to customers?2. Obviously the quality of a product does , but visual image , an instantly recognizable logo, contributes a great deal . 3. It is not only the image provided by the packaging that counts but the whole corporate identity of the company. The logo attracts customer
17、s a lot .句中 There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could promote the sale of a product. In order to keep our health , we should take more healthy food into In order to keep our health , we should take more healthy food into consideration. consideration. The company s promise to satisfy cu
18、stomers need is to its success in sales promotion.句中Undoubtedly, the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product. To maintain our health, we should consider more healthy food .The companys commitment to guaranteeing customers satisfaction is vital to its sales promotion. I have a prefer
19、ence for a basic mobile phone though it is not as advanced as a smartphone. 2.It is of great importance to keep a balanced diet as well as a healthy eating habit . 3.A healthy diet can equip us with a strong and healthy body You can obtain a large amount of information on the internet You can obtain
20、 a large amount of information on the internet nowadays.nowadays. 2.It is of great importance to keep a balanced diet as well as a healthy eating habit . 3.Make sure that you have 8 hours sleep. 8 hours sleep must be handled guana If things are not properly If things are not properly dealt withdealt
21、 with , our labor will be totally lost. , our labor will be totally lost. If things are not If things are not properly properly , our labor will be totally lost., our labor will be totally lost. 2In the United States , everyone can buy guns. 3.In the United States , guns are to everyone. 4.With a gr
22、owing number of people sharing information online , its positive side stands out. With an incresing of people sharing information online, some active factors gradually appear. sharing online information ,which enjoys growing poopularity ,is beneficial.tendencyavailablehandled I believe televison inf
23、luences our community I believe televison influences our community in a negative way. in a negative way. 2.They start to pick up the habit of characters on the show. 3.They start to the habit of characters on the show. 4.With a growing number of people sharing information online , its positive side
24、stands out. With an incresing of people sharing information online, some active factors gradually appear. sharing online information ,which enjoys growing poopularity ,is beneficial.tendencyget intoI hold the view that TV is affecting people negatively.For many parents,making sure their children get
25、 the right amount of sleep can be stressful.This is especially true during high-pressure times such as exams when students tend to study all night for the next day.Unfortunately,it is often counterproductive(适得其反的)because with fewer hours to sleep,the teen brain doesnt get enough time to lay down wh
26、at theyve studied the night before.In her groundbreaking book The Teenage Brain,scientist Dr.Frances Jensen explains that bedtime isnt simply a way for the body to relax and recover after working,studying or playing a hard day. It is the glue that allows us not only to recollect our experiences but
27、also to remember everything weve learned that day.Basically the more we learn,the more we need to sleep,which is why a good sleep is of great importance in achieving success at school.Then how much sleep do teenagers need?There is no magic number for exactly how much sleep teenagers need,but the Aus
28、trian Centre for Education in Sleep(ACES)suggests 8 to 10 hours per day for high school adolescents.What happens if they dont get enough sleep?According to ACES,poor sleep will have all sorts of negative effects on teenagers,including rise in blood pressure,mood swings and impatient behaviour.Withou
29、t adequate sleep the focus and attention drifts making it harder to receive information. The brain can no longer function to deal with information properly and access previously learned information.So,how can parents help?If you think your child needs more sleep,try making gradual changes to their s
30、leeping habits.Small increases have been shown to be effective in changing sleep patterns.And remember your children are going through a period of their lives when their brains and bodies are going through a lot of changes.Not only is your job to help make changes,its also to ride the wave with them
31、.It may not be easy,but they will thank you for it eventually.For many parents,making sure their children get the right amount of sleep can be stressful.This is especially true during high-pressure times such as exams when students tend to study all night for the next d a y . U n f o r t u n a t e l
32、 y , i t i s o f t e n counterproductive(适得其反的)because with fewer hours to sleep,the teen brain doesnt get enough time to lay down what theyve studied the night before.A PhenomenonA causeA TopicMany parents found it hard to make children have adequate sleep due to high-pressure study.But adequate sl
33、eep is essentialfor childrens study. (反话正说：点出Topic)In her groundbreaking book The Teenage Brain,scientist Dr.Frances Jensen explains that bedtime isnt simply a way for the body to relax and recover after working,studying or playing a hard day. It is the glue that a l l o w s u s n o t o n l y t o r
34、e c o l l e c t o u r experiences but also to remember everything weve learned that day.Basically the more we learn,the more we need to sleep,which is why a good sleep is of great importance in achieving success at school.An experts wordsAn Opinionsupport/explainChildren should sleep more when they
35、learn more, which is important for achieving success on study.Then how much sleep do teenagers need?There is no magic number for exactly how much sleep teenagers need,but the Austrian Centre for Education in Sleep(ACES)suggests 8 to 10 hours per day for high school adolescents.What happens if they d
36、ont get enough sleep?According to ACES,poor sleep will have all sorts of negative effects on teenagers,including rise in blood pressure,mood swings and impatient behaviour.Without adequate sleep the focus and attention drifts making it harder to receive information. The brain can no longer function
37、to deal with information properly and access previously learned information.QuestionsAnswersQ1：How much sleep do teenagers need?Q2：What happened if they dont have enough sleep?A1：Some experts suggests that.A2：Poor sleep will have negative effects on .because/sinceSo,how can parents help?If you think
38、 your child needs more sleep,try making gradual c ha nge s t o t he i r sl e e pi ng habits.Small increases have been shown to b e e f f e c t i v e i n c h a n g i n g s l e e p patterns.And remember your children are going through a period of their lives when their brains and bodies are going thro
39、ugh a lot of changes.Not only is your job to help make changes,its also to ride the wave with them.It may not be easy,but they will thank you for it eventually.A QuestionThe answerSo, how can parents help?Parents should help change childrens habits_.gradually/ progressivelyand with them/together2) C
40、hildren should sleep more when they learn more, which is important for achieving success on study.3) Some experts suggests that teens should sleep 8 to 10 hours per day because poor sleep will have negative effects on teenagers.4) So parents should help change childrens habits gradually and with the
41、m.1) Many parents find it hard to make children have adequate sleep due to high-pressure study, but adequate sleep is essential for childrens study. Coherence para 1para 2para 3para 4并列解释因果Basically,/FundamentallyAnd/Meanwhile,Therefore, Hence,One Possible Version:Many parents find it hard to make c
42、hildren have adequate sleep due to high-pressure study, but adequate sleep is essential for childrens study. Fundamentally, Children should sleep more when they learn more, which is important for achieving success on study. Meanwhile, Some experts suggests that teens should sleep 8 to 10 hours per d
43、ay because poor sleep will have negative effects on teenagers. Therefore, parents should help change childrens habits gradually and with them.Nice to know you again, !In her groundbreaking book The Teenage Brain,scientist Dr.Frances Jensen explains that bedtime isnt simply a way for the body to rela
44、x and recover after working,studying or playing a hard day. It is the glue that allows us not only to recollect our experiences but also to remember everything weve learned that day.Basically the more we learn,the more we need to sleep,which is why a good sleep is of great importance in achieving su
45、ccess at school.So,how can parents help?If you think your child needs more sleep,try making gradual changes to their sleeping habits.Small increases have b e e n s h o w n t o b e e f f e c t i v e i n changing sleep patterns.And remember your children are going through a period of their lives when
46、their brains and bodies are going through a lot of changes.Not only is your job to help make changes,its also to ride the wave with them.It may not be easy,but they will thank you for it eventually.The Last sentence of a paragraph.The middle transitional sentence.(中间过渡句)So,how can parents help?If yo
47、u think your child needs more sleep,try making gradual changes to their sleeping habits.Small increases have b e e n s h o w n t o b e e f f e c t i v e i n changing sleep patterns.And remember your children are going through a period of their lives when their brains and bodies are going through a l
48、ot of changes.Not only is your job to help make changes,its also to ride the wave with them.It may not be easy,but they will thank you for it eventually.After a question and the transitional part.In her groundbreaking book The Teenage Brain,scientist Dr.Frances Jensen explains that bedtime isnt simp
49、ly a way for the body to relax and recover after working,studying or playing a hard day. It is the glue that allows us not only to recollect our experiences but also to remember everything weve learned that day.Basically the more we learn,the more we need to sleep,which is why a good sleep is of gre
50、at importance in achieving success at school.After an exampleFor many parents,making sure their children get the right amount of sleep can be stressful.This is especially true during high-pressure times such as exams when students tend to study all night for the next d a y . U n f o r t u n a t e l
