1、 BY G.ZR e l a t i v e c l a u s e sapplied in writing PA R T O N EWriting in college entrance examination 你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。 M O D E LIt has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that ac
2、companies me through my whole high school. When feeling upset, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some gr
3、eat encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future. It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school. When feeling upset, I often choose to e
4、njoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. I do expect Youth can
5、 publish more classic works and have a promising future. establisheddepressedobtainedappreciateNot only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon. which引导的限制性定语从句as引导的让步状语+which引导的非限制性定语从句 名词性从句定语从句状语从句非谓语连词定语从句 1. 增加词数2. 补充细节，丰富文章内容3.避免单词重复和句式单一F u n c t i o n PA R T
6、 T W OSimple R e f l e c t i o n 1.使用关系代词that、which、who、whom、whose或as引导的定语从句2.使用关系副词where、why和when引导的定语从句 Mr. Zhang teaches you history.Mr. Zhang teaches you history.Mr. Zhang who teaches you history is on the Mr. Zhang who teaches you history is on the way to the class.way to the class.Mr. Zhang is
7、 on the way to the Mr. Zhang is on the way to the class.class. Miss Zhu is charming.Miss Zhu is charming.Miss Zhu who is spying on you Miss Zhu who is spying on you outside the classroom is charming.outside the classroom is charming.Miss Zhu is spying on you Miss Zhu is spying on you outside the cla
8、ssroom.outside the classroom. 定语从句位置？先行词后定语从句作用？对先行词进行修饰限定如何合成?1 12 23 3Mr. Zhang who teaches you history is on the way to the class.Mr. Zhang who teaches you history is on the way to the class.Miss Zhu who is spying on you outside the classroom is charming.Miss Zhu who is spying on you outside the
9、classroom is charming. 1找出这两个简单句中都出现的同一个事物。决定先行词2将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰先行词。选用关系词My uncle Li Ming is going to the city to attend an international meeting. My uncle Li Ming is going to the city to attend an international meeting. You live in the city.You live in the city.My uncle Li Ming is going to the cit
10、y My uncle Li Ming is going to the city wherewhere you live to attend an you live to attend an international meeting.international meeting. PART THREEI n s t a n t F e e d b a c k Im Li Hua, a Senior Three student. I am writing this letter to talk about the problem, _ is becoming worse and worse. In
11、 front of our school gate lies a narrow street, _ many vendors(小贩) put stalls on both sides during rush hour every day. Whatsworse, the only way to the school, _ is taken up too much space by those stalls, are also full of rubbish. I do hope to see a normal traffic and clean and quiet surroundings _
12、 we will feel happy to live and study. That is the reason _ I am writing this letter. I would appreciate it if you could help us solve the problem. 两句涉及同一人/事物的简单句Way to apply【2021新高考全国I卷应用文写作】When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part. It includes a lot of imaginative stories.Whe
13、n feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which/that which/that includes a lot of imaginative stories.includes a lot of imaginative stories. Way to apply【2021全国甲卷应用文写作】Word came that our school is going to hold a class
14、meeting.The topic is related to Chinese traditional customs.Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whosewhose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs.topic is related to Chinese traditional customs.或或Word came tha
15、t our school is going to hold a class meeting, Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting, the the topic of whichtopic of which is related to Chinese traditional customs. is related to Chinese traditional customs.两句涉及同一人/事物的简单句 Way to apply【2021北京卷应用文写作】We have planned to go for a wa
16、lk in Haidian Park this weekend.In the park, we could enjoy the beautiful scenery of early spring.We have planned to go for a walk in Haidian Park this weekend, We have planned to go for a walk in Haidian Park this weekend, wherewhere we could enjoy the beautiful scenery of early spring. we could en
17、joy the beautiful scenery of early spring.或或We have planned to go for a walk in Haidian Park this weekend, We have planned to go for a walk in Haidian Park this weekend, in in whichwhich we could enjoy the beautiful scenery of early spring. we could enjoy the beautiful scenery of early spring.两句涉及同一
18、人/事物的简单句 两句涉及同一人/事物的简单句确定先行词，将其中一个简单确定先行词，将其中一个简单句改成从句。句改成从句。（注意关系词的选用）（注意关系词的选用） Way to applyMy father is a teacher.Possible version:Possible version:My father is a teacher My father is a teacher whowho loves his work and his students very much. loves his work and his students very much.只有一个孤立的简单句W
19、hat kind of teacher Way to applyFirstly, we introduced ourselves briefly.Possible version:Possible version:Firstly, we introduced ourselves briefly, Firstly, we introduced ourselves briefly, whichwhich helped us to know helped us to know each other better.each other better.只有一个孤立的简单句Why do so Way to
20、 applyIn China, the students will always have a tough time in the last year in senior high schoolPossible version:Possible version:In China, the students, In China, the students, whowho have to take college entrance have to take college entrance examinations, will always have a tough time in the las
21、t year in examinations, will always have a tough time in the last year in senior high schoolsenior high school只有一个孤立的简单句The reason for toughness 两句涉及同一人/事物的简单句确定先行词，将其中一个简单确定先行词，将其中一个简单句改成从句。句改成从句。（注意关系词的选用）（注意关系词的选用）只有一个孤立的简单句确定先行词，根据逻辑关系，确定先行词，根据逻辑关系，用定语从句将其丰富。用定语从句将其丰富。 介绍型语句,可借助 which、who、whom、t
22、hat 进行合并。因果型语句,可借助 非限制性定语从句 进行组合。TIPSWay to apply lastslastswhich I will live inwhich I will live inin which I will livein which I will livewhere I will livewhere I will live Meituan take-away has changed our way of eating. Its service is very efficient and convenient.Meituan take-away has changed o
23、ur way of eatingMeituan take-away has changed our way of eating，whosewhose service is service is very efficient and convenient.very efficient and convenient.First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem. On the Internet you can learn how to read and write the characters.First, turn to
24、 the Internet for help when you have a First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters.characters. 2018年，华为成功研发出了5G技术，赢得了世界的关注。In 2018, Huawei developed 5G technology, which
25、won In 2018, Huawei developed 5G technology, which won the worlds attention.the worlds attention.对读书会感兴趣的同学，请于10月20日前到学生会办公室报名，欢迎提出有创意的建议。Those who are interested in the book club please Those who are interested in the book club please sign up in the Student Union office by October 20, and sign up i
26、n the Student Union office by October 20, and any creative suggestions are welcome.any creative suggestions are welcome. 人物：前阿里巴巴集团(Alibaba Group)董事长马云事件：创建了网上购物和移动支付(mobile payment)影响：推动了中国经济的发展，并给我们的生活带来了极大的便利，使我们足不出户就能买到更便宜的商品。Possible version:Possible version:Ma Yun, who was once the president o
27、f Alibaba Group, Ma Yun, who was once the president of Alibaba Group, established online shopping and mobile payment. These two creations, established online shopping and mobile payment. These two creations, which bring us great convenience and enable us purchase cheaper which bring us great convenience and enable us purchase cheaper products without going out, no doubt promote the economic products without going out, no doubt promote the economic development of Chia.development of Chia. THEE N D
