1、人物介绍写作Writing an Introduction of a Person某英文报正在举办主题为“A person I admire most”的征文活动，你有意参加。请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。注意：注意：词数120左右。_ 本写作任务要求介绍最钦佩的人，属于描写文。这类作文主要是通过对人物外貌、事迹等的描写来反映人物的思想、性格、品质等特点。A person I admire most The person I admire most is Tu Youyou,a committed and patient scientist.Born in Ningbo in 1930,Tu Y
2、ouyou graduated from Peking University.In 1967,she was chosen to join a team of scientists with the objective of discovering a new treatment for malaria.Her team examined many old medical texts,and evaluated lots of plants for their medical properties.From their research,they found a substance that
3、worked.They even insisted on testing the medicine on themselves to make sure that it was safe.Finally the medicine,which was called artemisinin,soon became a standard treatment for malaria and saved thousands of lives.Tu Youyous work is so important that the Nobel Prize of 2015 was awarded to her.Tu
4、 Youyou,who is not interested in fame,said it was a team effort.She is considered as a model for other people,inspiring more people to make great contributions to our country.人物介绍的写作要点可分为三部分：人物介绍的写作要点可分为三部分：第一部分第一部分Beginning：引出人物引出人物-简要介绍基本信息如生平，教育，职业等简要介绍基本信息如生平，教育，职业等第二部分第二部分Body：介绍人物主要经历介绍人物主要经历-
5、挑比较重要的事迹进行描写，贡挑比较重要的事迹进行描写，贡献或成就等献或成就等第三部分第三部分Ending：人物评价及对作者的影响人物评价及对作者的影响-人格，贡献，闪光点人格，贡献，闪光点注意：运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用 ，而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、经历、事迹时常用 。一般现在时一般过去时 1.引出人物：引出人物：The person I admire most is.,Of all the outstanding people,I admire.the most.There are many respectable people around us.The one
6、who I admire most is.1.引出人物：引出人物：-简单介绍人物背景简单介绍人物背景 (出生日期出生日期/出生地出生地+职业职业/兴趣兴趣)出生于：_ 酷爱；对有强烈的兴趣：_在方面有天赋：_从某大学毕业：_be born inhave/show a passion forbe talented in.When he was a boy,he (对.的热情)maths._(出生于)Shanghai,on September 12th,1980,Yao Ming is one of the best basketball players in China.Born ingradu
7、ate fromshowed a passion for归纳总结句型归纳总结句型Born in+地点地点+时间，人物时间，人物graduated from.Born into a.family,人物人物1.Born in Beijing in 1930,Yuan graduated from Southwest Agricultural College.2.Born into a rich family,Song Qingling got a good education and went to study in USA.3.Born into a musical family,he show
8、ed her talent for music when she was a little girl.练一练：练一练：袁隆平袁隆平1930年年9月月7日出生于重庆，刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。日出生于重庆，刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。可以先分解成两个句子。可以先分解成两个句子。确定定语从句部分确定定语从句部分 确定关系词确定关系词Possible answer:Yuan Longping was born in Chongqing on 7th September 1930,who studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.袁
9、隆平1930年9月7日出生于重庆。他刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。Yuan Longping was born in Chongqing on 7th September 1930.He studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.再思考一下，有没有其它更好的方式：再思考一下，有没有其它更好的方式：(1)(用分词做状语用分词做状语)(2)(用定语从句用定语从句)Born in Chongqing on 7th September 1930,Yuan Longping studied hard and showed a pass
10、ion for agricultural science.Yuan Longping,who was born in Chongqing on 7th September 1930,studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于重庆。他刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。更为关键重要的信息，适宜作为主句表示时间和地点的信息，适宜作为状语更多例句更多例句AThe person I admire most is Qian Xuesen,a famous scientist known as“the Fathe
11、r of Chinas space program”.（用同位语）B.The person I admire most is Zhong Nanshan,who helped defeat SARS in 2003 and is once again leading an expert team to deal with the COVID-19.(用定语从句)C.Of all the outstanding people,I admire Tu Youyou the most,who is the first Chinese scientist awarded the Nobel Prize
12、 in medicine in 2015 for her great achievements in curing malaria.2.介绍人物主要经历介绍人物主要经历-重要词汇重要词汇做工作：_ 把奉献给：_ 起关键性作用：_ 坚定的决心：_在获得巨大的成功：_使某人能够做某事：_下定决心做某事：_work asdevote oneself/entire life to.play a crucial role instrong will and determinationachieve great success in.enable sb to do stheg._(从毕业)Peking U
13、niversity in 1993,he_(做工作)a teacher in Wuhan University.Graduating fromworked as/take up a position asmake up ones mind to do/be determined to do sth2.介绍人物主要经历介绍人物主要经历-重要句型重要句型1.After graduation from.,he/she spend most of his/her time in doing/on2.In order to.,he made up his mind to do.3.With strong
14、 will and great determination,he achieve the great success in.4.Despite many difficulties,he/she managed to overcome them.5.He/She put his/her heart into and made great contributions to练一练：1.毕业后他决定从事农业方面的研究工作。2.他把他的一生奉献给了水稻研究。_3._(有着很强的意志力和坚定的决心),Madame Curie_ (在获得巨大的成功)discovering radium,which _(使她
15、能够赢得)the Nobel Prize.He has devoted all his life to researching on rice.With strong will and great determinationobtained great success inenabled her to winAfter graduation,he decided to do the research on agriculture.3.人物评价及对作者的影响人物评价及对作者的影响-重要词汇重要词汇为某人赢得好名声：_ 高度评价_做出巨大贡献：_ 被授予：_作为而闻名：_ 被尊称为_树立好榜样：_
16、 值得我们崇拜和尊重：_earn sb a good reputationthink highly ofmake great contributions tobe awarded.be known/famous asbe honored asset a good exampledeserve our admiration and respect3.人物评价及对作者的影响人物评价及对作者的影响-重要句型1.As a great.，he/she will be remembered by us forever.2.It is his determination that inspires me t
17、o go on when I have difficulty in learning.3.Having set a great example for us,he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.练一练：1.她为科研献出了一切,对国家作出了巨大贡献。2.因此，他被尊称为“计算机科学之父”并闻名，因他对世界的巨大贡献被授予了许多奖项。3.他给我们树立了好的榜样，他真的是一位出色的科学家，值得我们崇拜和尊重。She devoted herself to scientific research
18、and made great contributions to her country.As a result,he is honored and known as“Father of computer science”,rewarded with many prizes for his great contributions to the world.Having set a great example to us,he is really an excellent scientist who deserves our admiration and respect.写作训练你校英语报的 Th
19、e Admirable 栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你崇拜的人物钟南山，并投稿。1.1936 年出生于南京市一个医学世家；2.2002 年非典疫情发生后提出了有效的治疗方法；3.2020 年以来，为抗击新冠肺炎（COVID-19）作出巨大贡献；4.2020 年 8 月被授予共和国勋章（the Medal of the Republic）。注意：1.词数 120 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Born in Nanjing in 1936,Zhong Nanshan is known as an experienced epidemiologist
20、and physician.Zhong Nanshan grew up in a family of medical professionals,with his parents being world-famous medical experts.During the SARS outbreak in 2002 and 2003,he put forward a new treatment,which was later used as the standard treatment for all SARS patients in China,finally helping the coun
21、try control the epidemic.Around 17 years later,he again led the countrys fight against the outbreak of COVID-19.In August 2020,Zhong Nanshan was awarded the Medal of the Republic,the highest state honor,for his great contributions to Chinas fight against the epidemic.Zhong Nanshan is considered as a
22、 model for other people,inspiring more people to make great contributions to our country.写作训练假如你是李华，某英文报正在举办主题为“A person I admire most”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇有关著名科学家袁隆平的短文并投稿。1.概况：1930年9月7日出生于重庆，1953年毕业于西南农学院 (Southwest Agriculture College)等。2.事迹和成就：增加水稻产量，为许多国家解决了粮食不足的问题，被尊称为“杂交水稻（Hybrid Rice）之父”，获得许多奖项等。3.
23、评价和值得学习的地方。注意：1.词数：100左右；2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。Born in Nanjing in 1936,Zhong Nanshan is known as an experienced epidemiologist and physician.Zhong Nanshan grew up in a family of medical professionals,with his parents being world-famous medical experts.During the SARS outbreak in 2002 and 2003,he put forw
24、ard a new treatment,which was later used as the standard treatment for all SARS patients in China,finally helping the country control the epidemic.Around 17 years later,he again led the countrys fight against the outbreak of COVID-19.In August 2020,Zhong Nanshan was awarded the Medal of the Republic,the highest state honor,for his great contributions to Chinas fight against the epidemic.Zhong Nanshan is considered as a model for other people,inspiring more people to make great contributions to our country.
