1、读 后 续 写真题分析之真题分析之20222022浙江卷浙江卷By Arya目录1.1.真题再现2.2.ReadingReading3.3.AnalyzingAnalyzing4.4.PresentingPresenting5.5.AccumulatingAccumulating6.6.practicngpracticng真题再现PART ONE2022浙江卷I need to do something in my community in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high
2、school.Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen,so I did,too.It seemed like a good thing to do.I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need,but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner.We began preparing the food,fr
3、om mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat.Much still needed to be done before dinner was served,but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering.It wasnt until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner.As the line of people came toward me,
4、I got a little scared.Id come face to face with the homeless.How should I act?How would they treat me?Would they hate me for having more than they did?While some of the people looked very friendly,some of them looked so dangerous.I didnt have too much time to worry about it.I was assigned（分配）to serv
5、e the salad with the lady next to me.She smiled at me and said if I needed help,shed be right there,which I found quite comforting.2022浙江卷I had never seen so many people wanting food.They were of all ages and nationalities.Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty.Some looked like they had
6、totally given up on life,while others seemed to be making the best of the situation,smiling and joking.Some were better off than others,but they all needed a good meal to eat and a warm place to live in.It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didnt have a place to call home and the
7、 only food they got came from a soup kitchen.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:As they came in my direction,I put on my brightest and happiest smile.Paragraph 2:I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way.ReadingPART TWO2.1 Read for Bacground Information2.1 Re
8、ad for Bacground InformationPara.1I need to do something in my community in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school.Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen,so I did,too.It seemed like a good thing to do.whowhatI need to do somethin
9、g_(Purpose:in order to complete the community service hours required to_ high school)whereat a _I in my communitysoup kitchen graduate from2.2 Read for Plots and Detailed Informantion2.2 Read for Plots and Detailed InformantionPara.2I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in nee
10、d,but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner.We began preparing the food,from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat.Much still needed to be done before dinner was served,but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering.It wasnt unt
11、il a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner.Ipassing out dinners to those in needhomeless peoplemixing saladpreparing the foodseparating frozen meatPara.3As the line of people came toward me,I got a little scared.Id come face to face with the homeless.How should I ac
12、t?How would they treat me?Would they hate me for having more than they did?While some of the people looked very friendly,some of them looked so dangerous.I didnt have too much time to worry about it.I was assigned（分配）to serve the salad with the lady next to me.She smiled at me and said if I needed h
13、elp,shed be right there,which I found quite comforting.Would they hate me for having more than they did?How should I act?How would they treat me?暗线feelingscaredcomfortingthe lady next to me2.2 Read for Plots and Detailed Informantion2.2 Read for Plots and Detailed InformantionPara.4I had never seen
14、so many people wanting food.They were of all ages and nationalities.Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty.Some looked like they had totally given up on life,while others seemed to be making the best of the situation,smiling and joking.Some were better off than others,but they all needed
15、 a good meal to eat and a warm place to live in.It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didnt have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.2.2 Read for Plots and Detailed Informantion2.2 Read for Plots and Detailed Informantionsad and sympathetic ad
16、j.同情的Analyzing（以以Para.1Para.1）为例PART THREEParagraph 1:As they came in my direction,I put on my brightest and happiest smile.3.1 Raise questions about the given sentences3.1 Raise questions about the given sentences What would I do next?（my action）What would “they”react?（their reaction&motion）What wo
17、uld the lady do to help me?（ladys action）Who can be mentioned in the following text?Paragraph 1:As they came in my direction,I put on my brightest and happiest smile.3.2 Answer questions about the given sentences3.2 Answer questions about the given sentences What would I do next?A:distribute the foo
18、d.(动作链)What would “they”react?A:happy and grateful.(动作细节情感细节)What would the lady do to help me?A:Organize it patiently (动作细节)Who can be mentioned in the following text?Ihomeless peoplethe lady next to mePresenting（以以Para.1Para.1）为例PART FOURQ1:What would I do next?（my action）写得好的学生的例句Q2:What would “t
19、hey”react?（their reaction&motion）写得好的学生的例句ACCUMULATING（以以Para.1Para.1）为例PART FIVE动词/名词：gratitude,relief,satisfaction,warmth,pride,thank,relieve,move,touch;满分作文素材之感动温暖篇形容词/副词：thankful,thankfully,grateful,gratefully,moved,touched,relieved,warm,proud,satisfactory,satisfied,pleased满分短语：shed tears of gra
20、titude 流下感激的泪水 with gratitude 感激地be moved to tears 感动得落泪 have a deep gratitude towards 对 深怀感激 in gratitude for 为了感谢 owe sb.a lot/owe sb.a great deal 非常感激breathe a sigh of relief 轻松地舒口气 to ones relief 使人欣慰的是sigh/gasp with relief 松了一口气 a sense of satisfaction 满足感with a lump in ones throat 哽咽地 swell wi
21、th pride 满腔自豪满分作文素材之感动温暖篇好句鉴赏：1.Touched deeply and feeling a lump in my throat,I clapped my hands even more loudly.我非常感动，喉咙哽咽，更大声地鼓掌。2.Tears filling her eyes,she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。3.I finally sat down and cried,a mix of warmth and relief flooded/washed over me.我终于坐下来哭了起来，
22、心中满是温暖和宽慰。4.I could see tears of relief welled up in her eyes.我能看到她眼中涌出了宽慰的泪水。Practicing（以以Para.1Para.1）为例PART SIX根据所给情节，利用并模仿满分素材进行续写：Paragraph 1:As they came in my direction,I put on my brightest and happiest smile.Nervous as I felt,I did my best to keep myself calm and packed bread,salad and meat
23、 to those in need._(令我惊讶的是）,every one of them including those who looked very dangerous_(愉快地低声说“谢谢你”并真诚地向我鞠躬以表达他们的感激).Though my limbs were stiff and weary,_(我的心却很温暖).Seeing what I did make their day,_(幸福感与欣慰感向我涌来).根据所给情节，利用并模仿满分素材进行续写：Paragraph 1:As they came in my direction,I put on my brightest an
24、d happiest smile.Nervous as I felt,I did my best to keep myself calm and packed bread,salad and meat to those in need._(令我惊讶的是）,every one of them including those who looked very dangerous_(愉快地低声说“谢谢你”并真诚地向我鞠躬以表达他们的感激).Though my limbs were stiff and weary,_(我的心却很温暖).Seeing what I did make their day,_
25、(幸福感与欣慰感向我涌来).To my surprisemurmured in a cheering voice“Thankyou”and bowed to me sinserely to express their gratitude.my heart was warm A great sense of happiness and relief flooded over me.Thank youThank you！By AryaBy AryaSometimes,only a little kindness can light something shining,making the world more beautiful and harmonious.
