1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习良言一句三冬暖1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Im going to tell you a story.Its a tale about love,heartbreak and great shame.And its my story.This is a story Ive told every February since I started teaching in 1999.Its power lies,I think,in how it changes the way my students see me.Their su
2、per teacher is gone temporarily.Left behind is an 11-year-old girl whose feelings are hurt and each of my students is very angry about the cruelty of the one who did the mean thing.In my sixth grade,I fell madly in love.His name was David.He was tall,cute,kind of a bad boy which I found attractive.H
3、e had no interest in me at all,but I wrote down his name all over my diary:xx loves xx in giant hearts.So it was Valentines Day,elementary school style-construction paper mailboxes.Someones mom brought in cupcakes.Our parents bought us those variety-pack cards to send to everyone in class,with words
4、 like“Be My Honey”or“My Darling,Happy Valentines Day.”4续写原文It was party day.I spilled my cards onto my desk,and in many small envelopes,I saw a large one,shining like diamonds.My mind raced:Wow-someone likes me enough to buy me this giant card.Who could it be from?”With trembling hands I tore open t
5、he envelope and drew out a sparkly image of a queen seated on her throne(宝座).The heading read,“To a Queen of a Valentine.”I was overcome with excitement.Slowly,I turned the card over,and at the bottom I saw the signature and almost fainted:David.It was all too perfect to be real.Then my eyes travele
6、d up to the writing above his signature.In large,uneven(参差不齐的)letters,he had written me a special message.5段首句Para 1：It read,“To the Ugliest Girl in Our Class.”,and I completely froze,tears rolling down my face.Para 2：It was Valentines Day again and I held a party for my students,a party that celebr
7、ated kindness instead of cruelty.6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，作者讲述了自己亲身经历过的一个关于爱、心碎和巨大耻辱的故事。作者11岁六年级的时候感情受到了伤害David的伤害。他在情人节的时候在精致的女王卡片上写了一条留言送给作者，难堪的话语使激动惊喜的作者瞬间泪流满面。所幸作者没有被打倒。如今作者发给学生粉色的卡片，让学生给同学们写些积极、真诚的东西。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给
8、予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析 Para 1:It read,“To the Ugliest Girl in Our Class.”,and I completely froze,tears rolling down my face.由第一段首句内容“上面写着：“致我们班最丑的女孩。”我完全僵住了，眼泪顺着我的脸滚了下来。”可知，第一段可描写难堪的话语使激动惊喜的作者瞬间泪流满面，但作者活了下来，它给了作者传播善意的动力。10续写思路分析 Para 2：It was Valentines Day again and I held a party for my stu
9、dents,a party that celebrated kindness instead of cruelty.由第二段首句内容“又到了情人节，我为学生们举办了一个聚会。”可知，第二段可描写在情人节时作者发粉色的卡片给学生，让学生给同学们写些积极、真诚的东西。11续写素材 续写素材 妈妈了解学习情况讲学习的意义得到启发英语学习开窍学习突飞猛进对学习的感悟12续写素材 续写素材 行为类.动摇：shake/waver/sway.专注于：throw oneself into/focus on/concentrate on 情绪类.害怕的：afraid/frightened/worried.积极的
10、：positive/inspiring/optimistic/cheerful13续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1.My cheeks burning,I was so afraid that he and his friends were watching me,eager to see how I would react.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句作was so afraid的宾语和由how连接的状语从句）高分句型2.It shook what little faith I had in myself for a long time after.（运用了由what引导的宾语从句作sho
11、ok的宾语）高分句型3.Even if its someone you barely love,theres always something nice to say.（运用了由even if连接的状语从句）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现It read,“To the Ugliest Girl in Our Class.”,and I completely froze,tears rolling down my face.My cheeks burning,I was so afraid that he and his friends were watching me,eager to
12、see how I would react.Well,it ruined my Valentines Day.It shook what little faith I had in myself for a long time after.This was absolutely a disaster.but I survived.Luckily,the meanness of David didnt ruin my faith in this holiday of love.Instead its given me the motivation to spread kindness.16范文呈
13、现It was Valentines Day again and I held a party for my students.a party that celebrated kindness instead of cruelty.When distributing the pink paper squares,I said,“Write something positive and sincere to your classmates.Even if its someone you barely love,theres always something nice to say.Admire
14、their humor or fashion sense.”Their eyes lit up and threw themselves into writing.But the real fun came when they read what people wrote to them.Watching a shy kid tentatively open a card and then break into a big grin was worth all of the trouble.17范文译文上面写着“致我们班最丑的女孩”，我完全愣住了，泪水顺着脸颊流了下来。我的脸颊火辣辣的，我太害
15、怕了，他和他的朋友们都在看着我，急切地想看看我会有什么反应。好吧，它毁了我的情人节。这动摇了我很久以来对自己的信心。这绝对是一场灾难。但我活了下来。幸运的是，大卫的卑鄙并没有破坏我对这个爱情节日的信心。相反，它给了我传播善意的动力。又到了情人节，我为学生们举办了一个聚会。庆祝善良而非残忍的聚会。在分发粉红色的纸方块时，我说：“写一些积极和真诚的东西给你的同学。即使是你几乎不爱的人，也总有一些好话要说。欣赏他们的幽默或时尚感。”他们的眼睛亮了起来，全身心投入写作。但真正有趣的是，当他们读到人们给他们写的东西时。看着一个害羞的孩子试探性地打开一张卡片，然后咧嘴一笑，值得所有的麻烦。18Part 4努力方向19高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语20定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）21Thank you!
