1、By Ginny sept. 23, 2021 Writing styles A letter of advice A B A speech 建议信建议信 演讲稿演讲稿 苏州线上教育 演讲稿演讲稿写作思路和要点：写作思路和要点： Structure of speech Para 1： subject para 2： body para 3：concluding sentences Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on . My name is .Today I am very
2、glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about . 苏州线上教育 苏州线上教育 Accumulate various phrases, sentence patterns so.that commit/devote/dedicate oneself to. equip oneself with. Its crucial/important for sb. to do. bear/keep well in mind that cant wait to do sth . 苏州线上教育
3、so.that so.that cant wait to do sthcant wait to do sth Our school is so beautiful that I cant wait to introduce Our school is so beautiful that I cant wait to introduce it to you. it to you. Its important/ crucial for sb. to do.Its important/ crucial for sb. to do. More school activities should be g
4、iven to us , which is More school activities should be given to us , which is crucial to keeping the physical and mental of us teenagers.crucial to keeping the physical and mental of us teenagers. Use linking words First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, First of all, Firstly/First, S
5、econdly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At lastFinally, In the end, At last What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,well as, not onlybut (also), including, However, On the c
6、ontrary, but, Although+clause(However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句从句), ), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand SoIn spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand So me,while others,as for, sothatme,while others,as for, sothat . Thank you from the bottom of my heart
7、 for giving me this chance to speak to you today. 苏州线上教育 figure out key words, phrases, sentence pattern different dreams: . astronauts, scientists, businessman. some., some. while others. . Version 1 Different people possess different dreams. Some desire to be astronauts, some prefer to be scientis
8、ts while o thers are eager to be rich one day. put the words into sentences Version 2 When it comes to dreams, some people long to be astronauts or sceintists, while others are dying to be rich over night. independent, responsible. helpful, grateful, I want to be a man who is helpful to those in tro
9、uble. attributive clause . I want to be a self-dependent,responsibile,helpful and grateful man . . I want to be a man who is self-dependent and has a full sense of responsibility. someone who is always thankful to those who love and are loved. Someone who is of great use to the public and to our soc
10、iety. combine imitate pattern polish I want to be a man who is self-dependent and has a full sense of responsibility, a man who is helpful to those in trouble. Furthermore, I will spare no efforts to be someone who is always thankful for those who love and are loved, someone who is of great use to t
11、he public and to the society. 苏州线上教育 n. adj. v. attributive clause variety 建议信建议信篇章结构及内容(三段式) 首段首段：开门见山，向对方表明写信的意图。：开门见山，向对方表明写信的意图。 主体段落主体段落：建议的具体内容。围绕对方的困：建议的具体内容。围绕对方的困 惑，烦恼等问题，惑，烦恼等问题，委婉的提出有针对性的建委婉的提出有针对性的建 议并说明理由。议并说明理由。 结尾段结尾段：表示希望对方采纳建议、礼貌地总：表示希望对方采纳建议、礼貌地总 结或盼望回复。结或盼望回复。 建议信首段（表明意图）建议信首段（表明意
12、图） 1.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advic e on sth. 很高兴能收到你的信，在信中你问我关于很高兴能收到你的信，在信中你问我关于的建议的建议 2. I am writing to express my views concerning/abo ut 我写信来表达我对我写信来表达我对的看法的看法 3. Knowing that, Id like to give some suggestions. 知道你知道你，我想要给你些建议，我想要给你些建议 4.Im sorry to hear that you have troub
13、le in 听到你遇到麻烦，我感到很抱歉。 主体段落（给出建议和理由）主体段落（给出建议和理由） 1.Its helpful/important to do sth. 做某事是有帮助的做某事是有帮助的/重要的重要的 2.It would be a good idea to do sth. 做某事是非常棒的主意。做某事是非常棒的主意。 3.I would like to suggest that+句子（句子（should +V.） 我想要建议我想要建议 4.As far as Im concerned,/In my opinion，+句句 子子 末段（表达希望）末段（表达希望） I would
14、appreciate it if you could take my advic e into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议，我会非常感激。如果你能考虑我的建议，我会非常感激。 2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 我希望你能发现这些建议是有用的。我希望你能发现这些建议是有用的。 3. Im sure if you take my advice, you will 我确定如果你能采取我的建议，你会我确定如果你能采取我的建议，你会 4.Im looking forward to hearing good new
15、s from you.期望听到你的好消息。期望听到你的好消息。 你的朋友你的朋友LauraLaura来信向你抱怨她和父母亲之间的来信向你抱怨她和父母亲之间的 紧张关系，并寻求如何解决问题的建议。请你根紧张关系，并寻求如何解决问题的建议。请你根 据下列要点写回信。据下列要点写回信。 1. 1. 开成布公的和父母亲谈一谈表示对他们行为开成布公的和父母亲谈一谈表示对他们行为 的理解；的理解； 2. 2. 向向父母亲展示自己的责任心，需要帮助时清父母亲展示自己的责任心，需要帮助时清 楚的告诉父母楚的告诉父母； Possible version: Dear Laura: I am writing to
16、express my views concerning your relationship with your parents. Please try these pieces of advice and see if the y help. First and foremost, tell your parents you ful ly understand their love for you but explain the sid e effects of their over protectiveness. They may cha nge their mind after de le
17、arned about your feelings. Moreover, show your parents how responsible you can be. Make it clear when you need their help and when you dont. For example tell them that they need not worry about you when you go out with friends during the daytime but if you want to go out in the evening assure them that you will be home before 9 a clock I hope you will find my advice helpful I wish you all the best. Yours, Lihua Every detail matters. 细节成就完美。细节成就完美。 Encounter a better ve rsion of yourself ! 邂逅更好的自己！邂逅更好的自己！ Recipe for success
