1、 小作文评分标准小作文评分标准评分细则（评分细则（格式错扣格式错扣1分分）：）：1.1.极优档极优档 (1515分分)：书写规范书写规范；覆盖；覆盖所有要点所有要点，内容，内容充实充实；词汇丰；词汇丰富，行文流畅，有富，行文流畅，有修辞意识修辞意识。2.2.优秀档优秀档 (12-1412-14分分)：漂漂亮亮漂漂亮亮紧紧扣主题扣主题，覆盖所有，覆盖所有要点要点，内容，内容充实充实；语法结构多样语法结构多样，词汇，词汇丰富丰富，行文较为行文较为流畅流畅，显示出，显示出较强的语言运用能力较强的语言运用能力，允许有，允许有个别个别语法错误语法错误，但不影响语言表达。，但不影响语言表达。3.3.良好档
2、良好档 (9-119-11分分)：清清楚楚清清楚楚 紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语言有充实，语言有少量少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。错误，但基本不影响意思表达。4.4.一般档一般档 (6-8(6-8分分)：马马虎虎：马马虎虎紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容，语言错误已影紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。基本达到预期的写作响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。基本达到预期的写作目的。目的。1.通知：极优档(15分)：书写规范；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；词汇丰富，行文流畅。背景：庆祝
3、教师节，邀请外籍教师学生参与内容：庆祝教师节的过程 +注意事项 Notice In order to/To celebrate our new term and Teachers Day,our school intends to invite foreign teachers and students to attend a celebration on the schools playground/stadium this Sunday morning.The celebration includes three parts.First,the headmaster will delive
4、r a speech,summarizing the great achievements in the past one year.Then,prizes will be presented to some advanced teachers and excellent students.Besides,we will have a fantastic show performed by some talented students,which will leave a deep impression on you.Everyone is supposed to be there on ti
5、me.During the celebration,please keep quiet and keep the stadium clean.Join us and have fun.Student Union假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.参加者；2.时间、地点；3.活动：登山、野餐等。范文（一）Dear Chris，How are you now?Having known that there will be an outgoing for us these days,I am more than delighted to inv
6、ite you to join us,the students of class four.The activity will be scheduled next Sunday morning.We are supposed to gather at the school gate and set out at 8 am.We will climb to the top of the Mountain Lao,where we can get close to nature and enjoy ourselves.Whats more,we can also hold a picnic par
7、ty with the local people.Your participation can surely add honor to our trip and we are sincerely looking forward to your involvement.Yours，Li Hua2.邀请信范文2Dear Chris，Knowing that you are very interested in hiking,Im writing to invite you to take part in a hiking.The hiking will be held next Friday af
8、ternoon on the Mountain Lao which is a pretty good place to go hiking.I also invited my classmates Xiao Ming and my brother.I prepared some fruits and food that we could eat.We will climb the mountain so that we can appreciate the beautiful view.I believe you will enjoy it.Looking forward to your co
9、ming.Yours,Li HuaDear Smith,I am Li Hua,a regular customer of Amazon.Im sorry to trouble you,but I have to make a complaint about the school bag I purchased last week.When receiving the school bag,I was disappointed to find the color was quite different from what was shown in the advertisement.What
10、also annoyed me was that there were several black spots on the bag,which couldnt be wiped away.For the reasons above,I strongly demand either the school bag be exchanged or I be compensated with full refund.Looking forward to your prompt(adj.及时的/准时的)reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua3.投诉信：一般是写信人对产品或服务表示不满
11、的信件 首段：自我介绍+写作目的（投诉的问题）主体段：投诉背景；投诉内容；产生的后果 尾段：解决方案，期待对方答复Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to complain about a pair of sneakers I recently purchased from your website.What I ordered was a pair of black size-nine shoes but I received a pair of white size-8.5 shoes instead.Worse still,there was a ten-day d
12、elay in delivering my shoes,which should have been received on April 10.For the above reasons,I demand either a new pair of black size-nine shoes should be posted to me immediately or I should be given a full refund.Also,if I send back the wrong shoes,will your company pay for the postage?Thank you
13、for your consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Hua1.1.写信的目的写信的目的;2.;2.投诉内容投诉内容;3.3.要求要求:重新邮寄或退款重新邮寄或退款;4.;4.询问询问:若寄回若寄回,谁承担邮费谁承担邮费?3.投诉信Good morning everyone,Im delighted to make/deliver a speech before I go back to China next month.I really want to express my sincere gratitude for your generous help as
14、well as the great kindness!During the short time,not only have I enhanced my English,but also I have learnt about the abundant knowledge about cross-culture.I am blessed with the chance to study further here with you,which is a memorable time in my life!Besides,you are welcome to China to experience
15、 rich Chinese culture and Ill be the guide.Thats all.Thank you!4.发言稿内容：回中国，感谢近期的帮助Dear Sir or Madam,Learning that you are recruiting volunteers to help the English exchange students to adapt to their life here,Im writing to apply for the chance for the reason that Id like to get along with them and
16、enrich my life.To start with,I have a good command of English so that I can communicate with them fluently.In addition,Im quite easy-going and full of patience.I believe Ill be on good terms with them.As for my plan,Im going to show them around our campus and introduce our daily schedule.And Ill acc
17、ompany them for two whole days and give them enough time to adapt to the life here.I would really appreciate it if you could give me the precious（珍贵的）opportunity.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua5.求职信1）个人优点 2）计划安排Members Wanted An English speech association has been set up in our schoolNow，
18、we are recruiting membersIf you are enthusiastic about English speech，please join us By participating in our well-organized activities，you will harvest a lotTo begin with，you can develop good communication skills and make a lot of friends hereWhats more，not only can you acquire many speech skills an
19、d become a persuasive speaker but also you can improve your spoken EnglishSo join us and show the best of you to the world with your voice Students of all grades are welcomeIf you are interested in it，please scan the QR code and fill in the application formDont hesitate to take part in it!the Studen
20、t Union俱乐部招募信俱乐部招募信1.1.招募招募内容：内容：热爱演讲热爱演讲;年龄不限年龄不限2.2.简要说明加入社团的简要说明加入社团的好处并呼吁好处并呼吁大家参加大家参加3.3.报名报名方式：方式：扫描二维码并填写表格扫描二维码并填写表格招聘信（招聘要求介绍）招聘信（招聘要求介绍）English Advisor WantedThe Students Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term.The main r
21、esponsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English,answering their questions,and helping organize activities such as singing English songs,English evenings,or lectures on interesting topics.The applicant should be a native speaker of English.Fluency in Chinese is
22、preferred.The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.If you are interested,please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview.Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.Students UnionDear Lucy,Learning that you are interested in Chinese shadow play,Im writing to give you a
23、brief introduction about it.Chinese shadow play is a form of storytelling and entertainment.Clear mention of it isnt made until the Northern Song dynasty.In the performance,flat cut-out figures,made from animal skin or hard paper boards,are held between a source of light and a screen.Various effects
24、 can be achieved by moving both the figures and the light source.A talented performer can make the figures appear to walk,dance,fight and laugh.Write back soon.Yours,Li Hua6.中国传统文化1）皮影戏Dear Mr.Jefferson,Im so delighted to learn the International Cuture Week will be held in the school.Id like to reco
25、mmend traditional art of China.As we all know,Chinese paper-cutting is one of the most popular folk art forms.民间艺术形式 Traditional paper cuttings are also called window blossoms,which are put on the windows for decoration to create the festive atmosphere.Nowadays,the art has evolved uniquely to adapt
26、to different cultural styles and presented multiple social values.I will be honored if my recommended form of art is on show.Looking forward to your early reply.7.中国传统文化1）推荐传统艺术品Dear Daisy,I am writing to invite you to see the Hanfu Culture Show,as I know you are very interested in traditional Chine
27、se culture.The show will be held on November 20th in the City Art Centre./First,there will be catwalk（猫步）shows,at which models will show what Hanfu,the traditional clothing of Chinas Han ethnic（种族的）group，looks like./Apart from(besides)catwalk shows,the event will also invite experts to share differe
28、nt styles of Hanfu with us as well as the rich culture behind them.It is a good chance for us to learn about Hanfu.I really hope that you will come.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua7.中国传统文化1）推荐传统艺术品邀请留学生朋友Daisy 一起去看汉服文化表演秀（Hanfu Culture Show).请你用英语写一封邮件。内容包括：1.活动时间、地点；2.活动内容（汉服走秀、专家解说汉服式样以及
29、文化内涵等）Dear editor,These days,a growing number of people overseas are celebrating Chinese Spring Festival,an important traditional festival that features hope,reunion and happiness.Various Chinese cultural activities,such as gala performances,film shows,temple fairs and other forms of celebrations,ar
30、e held overseas.There are several reasons accounting for this phenomenon.（现象）（现象）To start with,the spread of Chinese Spring Festival is partly due to the increasing overseas Chinese population.Whats more,more and more countries have noticed or benefited from Chinas growing economic and political inf
31、luence,so they are also embracing our culture and traditions.Also,many overseas stores and recreational venues 场地场地/场所场所 are taking the opportunity to profit from the celebration.Last but not least,the Chinese government and various institutionshave made great efforts to help the festival go global.
32、（原因）（原因）I think its not only a good opportunity for foreigners to know about China,but a sign of Chinas growing influence on the world.I hope everyone can do his or her part to bring more Chinese traditions worldwide,and more people around the globe will embrace the diversity of culture.（原因）原因）XXX,s
33、enior high school student7.介绍春节介绍春节Dear Olivia,Inspired by your creative writing club,I want to establish such a club as well.lm writing to ask for your suggestions and help.Firstly,would you please tell me the procedure of how to start a club?I also want to know what events I could hold.Moreover,do
34、 you have any digital versions of teaching materials to share with me?Thank you so much for your time and support in advance.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua7.求助信求助信 李华求助建立创意俱乐部的建议。李华求助建立创意俱乐部的建议。8.个人生活（高中生活经历描述）The Musical symphony in my high school life With time going by,a
35、 little girl has already grown into a beautiful adult.Thats owing to the colorful experiences in my high school.During the three years,various activities enriched my life and enhanced my knowledge,which gave me the happiest time and let me know the significance of friends.However,there are also toug
36、h and frustrating situations:the failure in exam,the misunderstanding of friends and so on.But all of them had a good ending.Not only do they teach me how to address tricky problems,but also they make me more mature and independent,which were the most valuable.Life cant be the same forever.Were supp
37、osed to learn to grow up and still love our life.8.个人生活（我最尊重的人）The person I respect There are many respectable people around us.Take my neighbor Uncle Li for example.He is a volunteer who works as a gate guard in our community during the epidemic of COVID-19,and his main duty is to measure body temp
38、erature and check the passes for exit and entry.Regardless of the risk of getting infected,Uncle Li is responsible and devoted to his job.Even in terrible weather,he still sticks to his post and leaves no one unchecked.Thanks to his efforts in epidemic prevention and control,our neighborhood has bee
39、n in a good state.Actually,there are many selfless people like Uncle Li around us,and they well deserve our respect.8.个人生活（采摘经历）My Weekend In order to let us experience the life in the countryside,our schoolorganized a fruit-picking activity on a farm last weekend.On the way to the farm,fantastic sc
40、enery came into view.You can imagine how attractive the farm is:fresh air,clean water and warm sunshine.Our class were then assigned to pick strawberries.Although our clothes were soaked with sweat,we didnt mind it at all because it paid off.Seeing our fruits of labor were packed and loaded onto the
41、 truck,we all felt satisfied.This fruit-picking experience benefited us a lot and taught us the importance of working.As a saying goes,no pain,no gain.The experiment named Magic bottle is designed to prove whether air pressure really exists.At the beginning of the experiment,I prepared the materials
42、,including a boiled egg,a glass bottle whose neck is a bit smaller than the egg,and some hot water.With all the things prepared,the experiment began.First,I removed the shell of the egg.Then,I carefully poured some hot water into the bottle,and shook the bottle gently.After a few minutes,I poured ou
43、t the hot water.Just at the same time,I quickly placed the egg on top of the bottle.To my amazement,the egg squeezed into the bottle at once.After the experiment,I can draw the conclusion that air pressure indeed exists,and it is very powerful.It is the force of the air that pushed the egg into the
44、bottle.8.个人生活个人生活（做实验的经历）（做实验的经历）1.celebrate,congratulate 这两个动词均有“庆祝，祝贺”之意。celebrate通常指举行盛大隆重的仪式庆祝或纪念有意义的日子或某件事情，多暗示节日般的欢乐场面。congratulate指对他人祝贺为目的，希望他人幸福或走运指对他人祝贺为目的，希望他人幸福或走运2.congratulate sb.on/upon sth.因为某事向某人表示祝贺Congratulations to you!Congratulations!3.我写信向你表衷心祝贺。Im writing to express/send/show
45、my sincere congratulations on.4.请再次接受我的祝贺。我相信你会取得一个又一个的成功。Please accept my congratulations again.And I do believe you will achieve one success after another.9.祝贺信祝贺信Dear Mark,Hearing that you have won the first prize in the program Chinese Bridge hosted by the Confucius Institute,I felt extremely pr
46、oud of you.Congratulations！It came as no surprise that you won the contest,because your proficiency in the Chinese language as well as your deep dive into its culture has left a deep impression on me.I wonder how you have become such an excellent Chinese learner.Would you please share your stories o
47、f learning Chinese?Id appreciate it if you could write me soon.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua9.祝贺信祝贺信Dear Miss Smith,As the English Lecture/Speech Competition came to an end perfectly,Im writing to show my sincere thanks to you.It is obvious that we couldnt have got such success wi
48、thout your help.I also remembered you were so devoted to helping students that you sometimes forgot to eat meals.All efforts paid off.All the participants harvested a lot because they not only developed good communication skills but also they improved their pronunciation.It was your help that really
49、 played an important role.Thanks for your help sincerely.Yours,Li Hua11.感谢信感谢信12.求助信：指导戏剧求助信：指导戏剧Dear Miss Evans,Im writing to ask for your guidance on a short play,which is adapted from one of our texts.The text we have chosen is titled“Wildlife Protection”.It tells a story about a girl named Daisy
50、,who talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment.We need you to give us some expert guidance on dialogue between characters,body-action,plot,setting,and so on.Could we meet in our school art hall at 8:00 am this Sunday if it is convenient for you?We sincerely h
