1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习竞赛故事两人合作，赢得舞蹈比赛的胜利1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Jenny is a fifth-grader.She is one of the most popular girls in her class because she is among the brightest in her class.She can do the most cartwheels(侧手翻)in a row,but most of all,she has the talent to dance well.Last year,she ente
2、red the schools dance competition and won first place.Since that day,she has been the class attraction.This year,the school is holding another dance competition,but there has been a change.The competition has to be done in pairs.Jennys class was expecting her to win again this year.But Jenny was uns
3、ure.She wanted to enter the competition,but she had never danced with a partner before.She decided to ask some of the boys in her class to enter with her.They all said no because they did not know how to dance.4续写原文She finally decided to turn to one of her closest friends,Carl.Carl was unwilling to
4、join at first because he also didnt know how to dance.But Jenny insisted and he finally agreed.However,she was still worried because she knew it was going to be more of a challenge because Carl was not a good dancer.The competition was in two months,and only time could tell whether they would win or
5、 not.Jenny and Carl spent the first two weeks memorizing the steps of their dance with the help of their teacher.Carl was pretty clumsy at first.Jenny had to devote some time to helping Carl improve his skill.Fortunately,he finally got the hang of it.They spent the rest of the time perfecting their
6、moves.The day of the competition was near.Jenny and Carl were beginning to get nervous.5段首句 Para 1：The day of the competition arrived.Para 2：They came to a perfect start.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分
7、析 本文以人物为线索，讲述了五年级学生Jenny去年舞蹈比赛获得了第一名，成为了班上最吸引人的人。今年的舞蹈比赛要求两人一组，班内同学希望她再次获胜，却不能提供合适的舞伴。最后Jenny求助于她最亲密的朋友之一Carl，虽然Carl不擅长跳舞，但是在老师的帮助下，他们还是掌握了舞步，并且提高了技能和窍门，最终参加比赛，并且成功获胜的故事。9续写思路分析 Para 1：The day of the competition arrived.由第一段首句内容“比赛的日子到了。”可知，第一段可描写Jenny和Carl去参加比赛的的赛前心态和开场的表现。10续写思路分析 Para 2：They came
8、 to a perfect start.由第二段首句内容“他们有了一个完美的开始。”可知第二段可描写在比赛中出现困难，在Jenny和Carl的共同努力下克服困难并且成功获胜。11续写思路分析 续写线索 比赛的日子到了Jenny开始焦虑，Carl进行安慰比赛完美开始出现困难努力克服困难两人获胜，皆大欢喜12续写素材 可用词汇：行为类 注意到：notice/see 获胜：win/make it 绊倒：trip/stumble 设法成功做某事：manage to do/succeed in doing 情绪类 焦虑：anxious/worried 沮丧：upset/depressed13续写素材 可
9、用句型：高分句型1 As each pair took the stage one by one,Jenny grew more anxious.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句）高分句型2 If it hadnt been for Jennys talent and Carls quick reaction,they wouldnt have won.（运用了虚拟语气）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现The day of the competition arrived.Since Jenny won last years competition,she was to perform wit
10、h Carl last.As each pair took the stage one by one,Jenny grew more anxious.Carl noticed this and told her,“Itll be okay,Jenny.You are great,and I m sure we ll win.”Jenny felt better after hearing Carls words.Soon,it was their turn.They walked on stage and began to dance as soon as their song started
11、 to play.16范文呈现They came to a perfect start.The crowd began cheering them on.Suddenly,Jenny tripped and nearly fell.Carl managed to get her back up in time for their ending pose.Jenny was upset because of her fault.Shortly after their performance,the judges were ready to announce the winner.To Jenny
12、s great surprise,they won!But it was a close competition.If it hadnt been for Jennys talent and Carls quick reaction,they wouldnt have won.Jenny and Carl were really excited.17范文译文比赛的日子到了。由于珍妮赢得了去年的比赛，她将和卡尔一起表演最后一场。当两人一个接一个上台时，珍妮变得更加焦虑。卡尔注意到了这一点，告诉她：“没事的，珍妮。你很棒，我相信我们会赢的。”珍妮听了卡尔的话后感觉好多了。很快，轮到他们了。他们走上舞台，歌声一响起就开始跳舞。18范文译文有一个完美的开始。人群开始为他们加油。突然，珍妮绊倒了，差点摔倒。卡尔设法让她及时站起来，准备摆出最后的姿势。珍妮因为自己的过错而心烦意乱。表演结束后不久，评委们就准备宣布获胜者。令珍妮大为惊讶的是，他们赢了！但这是一场势均力敌的竞争。如果不是珍妮的天赋和卡尔的快速反应，他们不会赢。珍妮和卡尔真的很兴奋。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thank you!
